me with my contract t-shirt company. "BE Squared Clothing" URBAN PORTRAIT

[khmerxbxboi]

thanks for the love ;) yea I'm working on the urban section of my new layout site. this is one of my contract last year, I help them got into karmaloop.

tell me what you guys think !!!
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[LouR]

How is this showing the shirt? Only in the last one is there any hint of a graphic tee. The logo looks suspiciously like the Nintendo logo, which I thought it was at first glance. Is that intentional?

In the first shot, the skin tones are washed out. Also, I would tone down the eyebags on both guys.
In the second, while it's obvious what he's doing, there's nothing interesting going on. There's too much black as well.
In the third, there's no action, just an angry look. He should have at least been holding the control out a little as if making some effort. And whatever the graphic is, I can't see it except the purple dots.

To me, these are snapshots of a couple of guys in a den playing Nintendo. There's nothing artistic, dynamic or attention grabbing and nothing telling the viewer it's about the graphic tees, if that's what it is about.

[mrchile]

khmerxbxboi, welcome to the forums.
Your photos and links to your personal photo website are welcome here, but you may not link to commercial websites to sell things.